Very nice drawings of the kids, for they are drawn to scale; not only that, you were able to effectively convey each of the child's reactions and emotions to one another so that we understand what's going on for the most part. As the story progresses on, I do not fully understand what is going on with Angelica so I can't say much. Other than doing a bit more revisions, you are on the right track so keep up the good work!
Very nice drawings of the kids, for they are drawn to scale; not only that, you were able to effectively convey each of the child's reactions and emotions to one another so that we understand what's going on for the most part. As the story progresses on, I do not fully understand what is going on with Angelica so I can't say much. Other than doing a bit more revisions, you are on the right track so keep up the good work!
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